Criterion B

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I am enjoying writing this criterion because I can run with any idea I have and explain why I think that it would be good. I like this criterion because I don’t have to stick with any of the ideas I write about, I just get to explore them. I also like how this criterion funnels into C because I think it will make C a lot easier to write and give it a bit more direction. So far I am mainly focusing on Act 1 with my creative choices which is a lot more fun because it is such a crazy and wild act. I am trying to think of creative ideas for act 2 because even though it is supposed to be more realistic, I want to still have fun with it.

I got my feedback back today and it was very helpful. I still need to remember to do in text citations. After looking at my feedback I think that the main thing I need to work on is adding more detail into the Hows and Whys of what I am doing. I think I partially hit them but I could go way more in depth into the reasons why I want to do what I want to do. I think I also need to include how this will impact the audience. There is also a part where I am explaining the costumes and I need to go back and better explain Lisa’s costume and specify why she would be in a short, party dress. I also talked about the images that the play made me think about because we had done a similar exercise with Simon. I need to reincorporate that into the criterion and better explain why I included those images. When talking about live theater in this criterion I need to explain the impact on the audience. I also think I can discuss TEAM more in this section. I also only included 2 live theater moments, so I will need to add an additional one. Overall this feedback greatly helped me and when I revise I am going to be sure to include in depth detail about the Hows and Whys of what I want to do and add an additional moment of live theater.